Ted Tyler - 21 February 2012 08:42 AM
Hi G23, Yes it is funny and you do have some good mannerisms down, however, I would like to have seen something presented on the real issues.
I’ll echo that. I did look at a few of your videos a couple days ago and decided holding off commenting on them.
But you did ask: I liked them from the perspective of learning projects/assignments, getting your chops so to speak. On that level I think they are great.
Good foundation.
Work it some more and then start thinking about TT’s comment and what you really want to say with it.
But beware if you want to be serious about this you gotta be willing get the shit kicked out of your babies and your ego… that being the ruthless critique it takes to get to the next level.
given that you’re probably around good people, thus that beating is done with love.
You’ll drag yourself back together and up off the floor again, take a breather and come up with something you couldn’t have imagined before.
Good luck, keep us posted.
PS. Long ago, I learned something at the DenverCommunityCollege writing lab.
“Good writing is a contact sport.”
